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Hallo.
Weihnachten wird nerviger je älter man wird. Deswegen hab ich ein Lied geschrieben für alle, die sämtliche Türchen des Weihnachtskalenders schon vor dem ersten Dezember öffnen.
Das Lied heißt "What christmas meant to me" und ist einigermaßen Lo-Fi. Was haltet ihr von Text und von dem Song an sich? Was kann ich beim Abmischen besser machen? Besonders die Drums am Anfang bereiten mir etwas Sorgen. Klopfen die zu penetrant? Über Kritik würde ich mich freuen.
NEUE VERSION:
https://soundcloud.com/zille82/what-christmas-meant-to-me-2nd-try
ALTE VERSION:
http://soundcloud.com/zille82/what-christmas-meant-to-me
~~~ ZILLE - WHAT CHRISTMAS MEANT TO ME ~~~
I´m sitting in the dark
Listening to the white noise of the heating
I start humming along
In my desperate need to relate
The muddy, grey snow in the streets
Looks like ash to me
And the parents with their kids on the sledge call me Kane
As they carve through the remains
Of whatever it is I lost
I guess I forgot...
Now I feel like I´m molesting corpses
When I´m decking out dead trees
With all these colorful reminders of
What Christmas meant to me
It´s so washed-out, so distant
I´m afraid I´m lying through my teeth
When I´m telling myself hazy stories bout
What Christmas meant to me
George and Chris are rubbing their hands
In anticipation
They have hearts and special someones,
Homes and Royalties to boot
Meanwhile I´m shrinking on the inside
I´m shrinking on the inside
Until I wear my numb skin
Like an inflatable sumo-suit
These rusty bells don´t jingle
They just clank. It´s a cacophony!
But I keep shaking them just to pretend
This Christmas means something to me
Now I feel like I´m molesting corpses
When I´m decking out dead trees
With all these colorful reminders of
What Christmas meant to me
It´s so washed-out, so distant
I´m afraid I´m lying through my teeth
When I´m telling myself hazy stories bout
What Christmas meant to me
Trotz Allem: Frohe Weihnachten
Daniel
Weihnachten wird nerviger je älter man wird. Deswegen hab ich ein Lied geschrieben für alle, die sämtliche Türchen des Weihnachtskalenders schon vor dem ersten Dezember öffnen.
Das Lied heißt "What christmas meant to me" und ist einigermaßen Lo-Fi. Was haltet ihr von Text und von dem Song an sich? Was kann ich beim Abmischen besser machen? Besonders die Drums am Anfang bereiten mir etwas Sorgen. Klopfen die zu penetrant? Über Kritik würde ich mich freuen.
NEUE VERSION:
https://soundcloud.com/zille82/what-christmas-meant-to-me-2nd-try
ALTE VERSION:
http://soundcloud.com/zille82/what-christmas-meant-to-me
~~~ ZILLE - WHAT CHRISTMAS MEANT TO ME ~~~
I´m sitting in the dark
Listening to the white noise of the heating
I start humming along
In my desperate need to relate
The muddy, grey snow in the streets
Looks like ash to me
And the parents with their kids on the sledge call me Kane
As they carve through the remains
Of whatever it is I lost
I guess I forgot...
Now I feel like I´m molesting corpses
When I´m decking out dead trees
With all these colorful reminders of
What Christmas meant to me
It´s so washed-out, so distant
I´m afraid I´m lying through my teeth
When I´m telling myself hazy stories bout
What Christmas meant to me
George and Chris are rubbing their hands
In anticipation
They have hearts and special someones,
Homes and Royalties to boot
Meanwhile I´m shrinking on the inside
I´m shrinking on the inside
Until I wear my numb skin
Like an inflatable sumo-suit
These rusty bells don´t jingle
They just clank. It´s a cacophony!
But I keep shaking them just to pretend
This Christmas means something to me
Now I feel like I´m molesting corpses
When I´m decking out dead trees
With all these colorful reminders of
What Christmas meant to me
It´s so washed-out, so distant
I´m afraid I´m lying through my teeth
When I´m telling myself hazy stories bout
What Christmas meant to me
Trotz Allem: Frohe Weihnachten
Daniel
