
assinger
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Hallo,
anbei ein Link zu meinem ersten komplett in Eigenregie aufgenommenen/gemixten Song. Ich wäre für Tipps zur Verbesserung des Mixes, der Soundauswahl oder auch des Arrangements sehr, sehr dankbar.
Ist auf Grund des [g=365]Synthesizer[/g] Einsatzes ein recht poppiger Rocksong geworden....oder ist es schon eher ein rockiger Popsong? Entscheidet selbst
http://www.file-upload.net/download-1166699/DirgeMix4.mp3.html
Der Song heißt "Dirge", hier die Lyrics:
Don‘t follow, don‘t swallow the stories, that they din into your head
Don‘t bury, your worries if you dare, this will be your own dead
Make it right, don‘t hide fight against the machine that works in your head
Always the same, stupid game, you are never the one who's to blame
Chorus1:
Life is as innocent as a whore in a crowded church
Life can be so blur
If you don‘t have any clue this song could be your dirge
II.
Be strong, as long until you find your own personal way
Be wise, see the lies all around you, that betray
Be patient, no resignation, be at pains to do something everday
If you don‘t, you won‘t find the answers behind the grey
Chorus2:
Be like the first man on the sun, do what no one has ever done
Just follow the ray of light
Life is as innocent as a whore in a crowded church
Life can be so blur
If you don‘t have any clue this song could be your dirge
Chorus3:
If you think your time has come, you could be the one
Who breaks through the wall of lies
Be like the first man on the sun. Do what no one ever done
Just follow the ray of light
Life is as innocent as a whore in a crowded church
Life can be so blur
If you dont have any clue this song could be your dirge
anbei ein Link zu meinem ersten komplett in Eigenregie aufgenommenen/gemixten Song. Ich wäre für Tipps zur Verbesserung des Mixes, der Soundauswahl oder auch des Arrangements sehr, sehr dankbar.
Ist auf Grund des [g=365]Synthesizer[/g] Einsatzes ein recht poppiger Rocksong geworden....oder ist es schon eher ein rockiger Popsong? Entscheidet selbst

http://www.file-upload.net/download-1166699/DirgeMix4.mp3.html
Der Song heißt "Dirge", hier die Lyrics:
Don‘t follow, don‘t swallow the stories, that they din into your head
Don‘t bury, your worries if you dare, this will be your own dead
Make it right, don‘t hide fight against the machine that works in your head
Always the same, stupid game, you are never the one who's to blame
Chorus1:
Life is as innocent as a whore in a crowded church
Life can be so blur
If you don‘t have any clue this song could be your dirge
II.
Be strong, as long until you find your own personal way
Be wise, see the lies all around you, that betray
Be patient, no resignation, be at pains to do something everday
If you don‘t, you won‘t find the answers behind the grey
Chorus2:
Be like the first man on the sun, do what no one has ever done
Just follow the ray of light
Life is as innocent as a whore in a crowded church
Life can be so blur
If you don‘t have any clue this song could be your dirge
Chorus3:
If you think your time has come, you could be the one
Who breaks through the wall of lies
Be like the first man on the sun. Do what no one ever done
Just follow the ray of light
Life is as innocent as a whore in a crowded church
Life can be so blur
If you dont have any clue this song could be your dirge