Light my fire

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Lighty

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Jupi,
habe einen neuen Text fabriziert :D Ging komischer Weise heute echt schnell :)

Lighty my fire

I let out my hidden feelings
to cut me off the vansihing reality
I'm desperatly fighting against the doom
but even you know fate is unavoidable
Nobody can predict what will happen
and the future that reflects in your eyes
is lying in my hand

Refrain:
Shout out, that you are still here
I will shout,woah, till you hear me far away
Worth to fight is the future
Worth to die is the love
Shout back to me, woah,
Light my fire

The weight of the world
digs me deeper in my doubts
But even there is no real answer
if I see your face once again
I will fight against the invincible
with a flame burning inside of me
that won't extinguish

Refrain:
Shout out, that you are still here
I will shout,woah, till you hear me far away
Worth to fight is the future
Worth to die is the love
Shout back to me, woah,
Light my fire

Bridge:
My tired body hurts
the ashes fell like snow
My flame inside burning weakly
seems to extinguish

Refrain 2:
Shout out, that you are still here
I will shout,woah, till you hear me far away
Worth to fight is the future
Worth to die is the love
I hear your shout, woah,
Light my fire
You light my fire
You light me and I win

Schreibt bitte eure Meinung dazu und auch gerne Verbesserungsvorschläge :)

Lg Lighty
 
Wow! Also diesen Text finde ich echt super!
Ich glaub das Lied bleibt echt im Ohr. Von wegen du kannst keine guten Refrain schreiben;)
Gerade den finde ich in diesem Lied wirklich super.gerade die bridge ist echt bildhaft gehalten, also ich bin begeistert :D
 

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