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Huhu, ich hätt´ auch mal einen Text zum bewerten/ausbessern.
Muss dazu sagen, dass bei uns Texte nur ein notwendiges Übel sind und von daher weder Anspruch auf Genialität oder Weltverbesserung haben.
Macht er generell einigermaßen Sinn oder ist er Scheiße hoch Neun?
Gibt´s grobe/peinliche Schnitzer?
Merci!
hiesige Anregungen/Gedanken (auch noch eigene) mit eingeabreitet
New life
verse1
Your mind absent
waiting for salvation for so long.
You’ve been looking for a healing
but ease and relaxation won’t come.
Come and feel the lightness of ... being.
(Hey,) Where’re you going?
There is a chance to leave all-time frustration
I can show you. Please, come along.
chorus
Break out and feel it.
I swear you’ll beat it.
And when the pain has gone away
you’ll like it. You’ll see it.
Life can be more than easy.
New happiness will come and stay.
after-chorus
Y´ can’t help yourself?
You wanna get out?
If I can help myself y´ gonna…
verse2
Now that you know
how to keep the balance in your mind
you should see life as a godsend.
Weariness has come to an end.
Come increase the lightness of ... being.
Keep your tail up.
If you might need someone to come and join you.
So let’s get down and dirty again.
chorus
Break out and feel it.
I swear you’ll beat it.
And when the pain has gone away
you’ll like it. You’ll see it.
Life can be more than easy.
New happiness will come and stay.
rise
You (w)rack your brain.
No pain, no gain.
Get up and spin.
Escape and win.
chorus
Break out and feel it.
I’ve sworn you’ll beat it.
Now that the pain has gone away…
Break out and feel it.
I’ve sworn you’ll beat it.
Now that the pain has gone away
this is the healing.
Alive and breathing.
Your will has blown the crud away.
You like it. You feel it.
Your life is now that easy
and happiness is gonna stay.
.
Muss dazu sagen, dass bei uns Texte nur ein notwendiges Übel sind und von daher weder Anspruch auf Genialität oder Weltverbesserung haben.
Macht er generell einigermaßen Sinn oder ist er Scheiße hoch Neun?
Gibt´s grobe/peinliche Schnitzer?
Merci!
hiesige Anregungen/Gedanken (auch noch eigene) mit eingeabreitet
New life
verse1
Your mind absent
waiting for salvation for so long.
You’ve been looking for a healing
but ease and relaxation won’t come.
Come and feel the lightness of ... being.
(Hey,) Where’re you going?
There is a chance to leave all-time frustration
I can show you. Please, come along.
chorus
Break out and feel it.
I swear you’ll beat it.
And when the pain has gone away
you’ll like it. You’ll see it.
Life can be more than easy.
New happiness will come and stay.
after-chorus
Y´ can’t help yourself?
You wanna get out?
If I can help myself y´ gonna…
verse2
Now that you know
how to keep the balance in your mind
you should see life as a godsend.
Weariness has come to an end.
Come increase the lightness of ... being.
Keep your tail up.
If you might need someone to come and join you.
So let’s get down and dirty again.
chorus
Break out and feel it.
I swear you’ll beat it.
And when the pain has gone away
you’ll like it. You’ll see it.
Life can be more than easy.
New happiness will come and stay.
rise
You (w)rack your brain.
No pain, no gain.
Get up and spin.
Escape and win.
chorus
Break out and feel it.
I’ve sworn you’ll beat it.
Now that the pain has gone away…
Break out and feel it.
I’ve sworn you’ll beat it.
Now that the pain has gone away
this is the healing.
Alive and breathing.
Your will has blown the crud away.
You like it. You feel it.
Your life is now that easy
and happiness is gonna stay.
.