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HelmudThe1st
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Hey
habe vor einiger zeit mit dem schreiben von eigenen Songtexten angefangen
nun würde ich gerne eure Meinung zu einen meiner Texte hören
habe leider noch nicht die zeit gefunden eigene songs aufzunehmen
aber ich hoffe das dass noch kommt
"Hear I am
Party is going on and in time I’m home alone
Every one is laughing on her/his jokes
End of party
They All are gone / Every one is gone ??
And I’m here and home alone
So many alcohol I’ve drunken
I’m so tired I’m so lonely
So I’m sitting on a chair
And the …
Flipper stands in corner
And I ….
…feel like an ball in an flipper
I wont to be a ball in a flipper
fly and be one of some balls which
are the 1st
time is lonely time is sad
I’m a ball in a flipper
My skin is bushed/Bad??
I’m flying around
And I….
…. wont to be a ball in a flipper
fly and be one of some balls which
are the 1st
And now I standing here right now
I am drunken I am drunken
Party is over
And She is standing there in the door
She’s/He’s laughing at me
I’m so sad I feel so bad
And I …
...wont to be a ball in a flipper
fly and be one of some balls which
are the 1st
End of story time is come
I love she/he and she/he loves me
It is night I’m sad so good night
I go in my bed "
HelmudThe1st
habe vor einiger zeit mit dem schreiben von eigenen Songtexten angefangen
nun würde ich gerne eure Meinung zu einen meiner Texte hören

habe leider noch nicht die zeit gefunden eigene songs aufzunehmen
aber ich hoffe das dass noch kommt
"Hear I am
Party is going on and in time I’m home alone
Every one is laughing on her/his jokes
End of party
They All are gone / Every one is gone ??
And I’m here and home alone
So many alcohol I’ve drunken
I’m so tired I’m so lonely
So I’m sitting on a chair
And the …
Flipper stands in corner
And I ….
…feel like an ball in an flipper
I wont to be a ball in a flipper
fly and be one of some balls which
are the 1st
time is lonely time is sad
I’m a ball in a flipper
My skin is bushed/Bad??
I’m flying around
And I….
…. wont to be a ball in a flipper
fly and be one of some balls which
are the 1st
And now I standing here right now
I am drunken I am drunken
Party is over
And She is standing there in the door
She’s/He’s laughing at me
I’m so sad I feel so bad
And I …
...wont to be a ball in a flipper
fly and be one of some balls which
are the 1st
End of story time is come
I love she/he and she/he loves me
It is night I’m sad so good night
I go in my bed "
HelmudThe1st