
chockann
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Hey,
ich habe einen neuen Song geschrieben und würde mich sehr freuen, wenn ich hier Feedback erhalten könnte
Es ist eine Demoversion und die Aufnahme wirklich sehr einfach (Akustik Gitarre und Gesang mit dem Handy aufgenommen). Mir geht es aber auch in erster Linie um das Musikalische und Lyrische
Ich hoffe der Song gefällt euch
VG Chockann
Lyrics:
1. He just said,
“Okay, we’re happy about it.”
Maybe he knows that it doesn’t fit,
But okay, I’m happy about it...
R. His words hit me different,
Because they don’t want it anymore,
His words went deeper…
But they were what I was living for...
2. I read your words I once wrote down.
Since that page, I’ve been alone.
I thumb through my diary,
Through all the guys I used to be…
Through the truth you’ll never see…
3. Can you please give me
A second chance—or a third one?
Is this what we want to be?
Or will this version of us go down?
Bridge: This was my place, was my time,
You know it was my safe space...
4. This time never got a name.
Are these words to blame?
When we started to scream,
’Cause no one was meant to give in...
ich habe einen neuen Song geschrieben und würde mich sehr freuen, wenn ich hier Feedback erhalten könnte
Es ist eine Demoversion und die Aufnahme wirklich sehr einfach (Akustik Gitarre und Gesang mit dem Handy aufgenommen). Mir geht es aber auch in erster Linie um das Musikalische und Lyrische
Ich hoffe der Song gefällt euch
VG Chockann
Lyrics:
1. He just said,
“Okay, we’re happy about it.”
Maybe he knows that it doesn’t fit,
But okay, I’m happy about it...
R. His words hit me different,
Because they don’t want it anymore,
His words went deeper…
But they were what I was living for...
2. I read your words I once wrote down.
Since that page, I’ve been alone.
I thumb through my diary,
Through all the guys I used to be…
Through the truth you’ll never see…
3. Can you please give me
A second chance—or a third one?
Is this what we want to be?
Or will this version of us go down?
Bridge: This was my place, was my time,
You know it was my safe space...
4. This time never got a name.
Are these words to blame?
When we started to scream,
’Cause no one was meant to give in...