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Hi 
Wollte mal 'n ehrliches [g=94]Feedback[/g] von Leuten, die mehr Ahnung haben als meine Mutter
.
Is der Text zu monoton ??
Mir fehlt momentan noch die Bridge, aber ich bin mir halt nicht sicher, ob der Text überhaupt reif ist, mein Zimmer zu verlassen und die internationalen Bühnen kennenzulernen
...oder zumindest Weihnachten der Familie vorgestellt zu werden...
würd mich über ein paar Meinungen freuen...
Gruß Lüke
Youre so complicated
Hiding whats on your mind
And its so overrated
The definitions you assigned
You must assume me vacant
To believe me so confined
All I said you might have negated
But that still leaves the facts behind
Treat me
like the way i treat you
Stop acting
the way you do
I won't let you bring me down
Won't let you watch me drown
In the love
I feel for you
Youre so complicated
Never saying whats on your mind
Maybe destiny calculated
We would unravel and unwind
You must assume me vacant
To believe me so resigned
All I believed you might have negated
But that still leaves the truth entwined
Treat me
like the way i treat you
Stop acting
the way you do
I won't let you bring me down
Won't let you watch me drown
In the love
I feel for you
BRIDGE
Treat me
like the way i treat you
Stop acting
the way you do
I won't let you bring me down
Won't let you watch me drown
In the love
I feel for you
Wollte mal 'n ehrliches [g=94]Feedback[/g] von Leuten, die mehr Ahnung haben als meine Mutter
Is der Text zu monoton ??
Mir fehlt momentan noch die Bridge, aber ich bin mir halt nicht sicher, ob der Text überhaupt reif ist, mein Zimmer zu verlassen und die internationalen Bühnen kennenzulernen
würd mich über ein paar Meinungen freuen...
Gruß Lüke
Youre so complicated
Hiding whats on your mind
And its so overrated
The definitions you assigned
You must assume me vacant
To believe me so confined
All I said you might have negated
But that still leaves the facts behind
Treat me
like the way i treat you
Stop acting
the way you do
I won't let you bring me down
Won't let you watch me drown
In the love
I feel for you
Youre so complicated
Never saying whats on your mind
Maybe destiny calculated
We would unravel and unwind
You must assume me vacant
To believe me so resigned
All I believed you might have negated
But that still leaves the truth entwined
Treat me
like the way i treat you
Stop acting
the way you do
I won't let you bring me down
Won't let you watch me drown
In the love
I feel for you
BRIDGE
Treat me
like the way i treat you
Stop acting
the way you do
I won't let you bring me down
Won't let you watch me drown
In the love
I feel for you