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Hi all,
nehme den Sam. Gesang bei meinem neuesten Lied auf. Wollte noch den Text hier rein posten, vl. liest jemand von euch drüber und korrigiert mir grammatikfehler usw? Wär echt nett!!!
Hier mal die Lyrics:
a new beginning
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tonight I'll change everything
I swear the dying hope
will have counted down
and last as just "the known"
I can't go back
I will leave this town
I will try again
and leave all the strain behind
your eyes haven't seen anything
you would hate everything
it's a new beginning.
where I'd used
to lock my time's
where I refused // hier geht sich "refused" vom singen nicht ganz aus, gibts alternativen, die sich auf "used" reimen???
the ocean holds
the trust we've built
the risk is black
i feel the thrill
rushing down
my neck until
waves break onto
the trust we've built
save me from all I know
until I fall I'll show
how I still pretend
that everything's alright
come on and hold me close
breathing the cold air
flows down your face is mine
and everything's alright
ambiguity
will last
I won't compare you
with my past
the red sand bears
the hope we've felt
all the choices
I have made
forever far
reverse this game
waves carry on
the hope we've felt
save me from all I know
until I fall I'll show
how I still pretend
that everything's alright
come on and hold me close
breathing the cold air
flows down your face is mine
and everything's alright
the fate has come now
waiting for
for me to will now
waiting short
and it's bleeding down this time
and it's bleeding down this time
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lg,
Fabs
nehme den Sam. Gesang bei meinem neuesten Lied auf. Wollte noch den Text hier rein posten, vl. liest jemand von euch drüber und korrigiert mir grammatikfehler usw? Wär echt nett!!!
Hier mal die Lyrics:
a new beginning
----------------------------------------
tonight I'll change everything
I swear the dying hope
will have counted down
and last as just "the known"
I can't go back
I will leave this town
I will try again
and leave all the strain behind
your eyes haven't seen anything
you would hate everything
it's a new beginning.
where I'd used
to lock my time's
where I refused // hier geht sich "refused" vom singen nicht ganz aus, gibts alternativen, die sich auf "used" reimen???
the ocean holds
the trust we've built
the risk is black
i feel the thrill
rushing down
my neck until
waves break onto
the trust we've built
save me from all I know
until I fall I'll show
how I still pretend
that everything's alright
come on and hold me close
breathing the cold air
flows down your face is mine
and everything's alright
ambiguity
will last
I won't compare you
with my past
the red sand bears
the hope we've felt
all the choices
I have made
forever far
reverse this game
waves carry on
the hope we've felt
save me from all I know
until I fall I'll show
how I still pretend
that everything's alright
come on and hold me close
breathing the cold air
flows down your face is mine
and everything's alright
the fate has come now
waiting for
for me to will now
waiting short
and it's bleeding down this time
and it's bleeding down this time
----------------------------------------------
lg,
Fabs