Was meint ihr worüber der Song handelt?

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Hi
ich hab mal einen text geschrieben
und will jetzt mal nicht vorweg sagen worüber er handelt, vielmehr würde mich interessieren, ob meine Intentionen auch an den hörer rüberkommen.
was denkt ihr worüber er handelt, und gibts vielleicht verbesserungsvorschläge?
eins vorweg, es gibt mehrere Interpretationsmöglichkeiten
Englischkenntnisse währen von vorteil :)

I Wonder

I wonder where you’ve gone away
In this darkest hour
I wonder where the time has taken
You to lay down your soul
So fragile you have told
So am I now left here cold and so I

I wish the time was right
To say sorry in your eyes
Don’t forsake me oh
What have I been done
To let you go

I Wonder how you stood up straight
In your proudest hour
I wonder how you came to me
With that smile in your face you unveiled
My weaknesses, my traits
What would I pay to receive one more moment just with you

And I would wish the time was right
To say sorry in your eyes
Don’t forsake me
Oh what have I been done
to let you go

I wonder how you felt that day
In your final hour
I wonder why I wasn’t there
To bare all your pain you have felt
So woeful I’ve not held
Your hand to guide you home

So I wish the time was/wasn’t right
To say sorry in your eyes
Don’t forsake me
Oh what have I been done
to let you go

You promised me a whisper
With every broken bone
You said you will not call me
Until I have atoned
How you wished this hunt,
how you wished this hunt for more
doesn’t matter where you are
so nourish hope that I die
I will’ve followed you home

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Den Song dazu kann man unter der rubrik [g=94]feedback[/g] hören.
hoffe das sich leute beteiligen :):)
 

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