Hier ein schon länger da liegender Text von mir, an den ich mich jetzt endlich mal ranwagen will, daraus ein Lied zu machen. Die Ausführungen des jungen Königs hatten mich daran erinnert. Es geht in dem text zum Einen um eine Trennung und zum Anderen um das Erwachsenwerden. Weil mir die Trennung damals recht nah ging, schrieb ich in Bildern. Die Sprache ist vielleicht fast für den äußeren Inhalt des Textes zu modern, aber mich persönlich stört das nicht. Was sagt ihr dazu? Sind die Bilder verständlich, funktionieren sie für euch? the fallen knight 1. I feel like a fallen knight, oh since you left my life and it seems like I'll have to fight for your love and for my life, I'm still young, so I have to seek my quest just wanted to be the best To serve and to protect your realm just to be what I am I knew what to do to save us two, when I felt that my fate (is) are you (is würde besser klingen, auch wennes falsch ist) I failed, didn't think that I would Oh, I don't deserve the knighthood any more 2. I feel like a fallen knight, oh since you left my life now it seems like I have to fight for your love and for my life, My mission was to fight against demons of the past inside myself I am weak from that demon's legacy many enemies defeated me (schade dass man legacy nicht so auspricht wie ich damals dachte, hat jemand ne Idee für n besseren Reim?) So weak, oh I used to run away wish I'd met you another day breaking the rules of chivalry made my life a misery Once, it was two years ago I took off my rida' boots you know Every man needs to ride To be himself and feel his pride/ And Chorus: //now you can listen to my song/ Me and my steed ridin' on/// and on… 3. I feel like a fallen knight, oh since you left my life now I know that I'll have to fight for my quest, to get alive I am doomed since you cast me out of your realm and my last resort is my reason speaking to me, tellin' me how to forge my sword "Iron will is heated by your love and the blaze of anger forge it on the anvil of truth with the fate's hammer Water of wisdom for eternal durability/ the sword of reason requires all your abilities/" it's time now I have to forge my sword/ it's time now I have to use my sword it's time// Put on my armour suite it's time get on my steed again/ Out there it is dangerous legions of demons came to us/ but I train to use my combat gear fulfill my quest and have no fear/ but I train to use my combat gear fulfill my quest and have no fear/ but I train to use my combat gear fulfill my quest and have no fear/ Chorus: //now you can listen to my song/ Me and my steed ridin' on/// and on… //This is no place to be take me away my steed// far away from here/ Since you banished me/ You can see me/ As a lonely rider/ In the sunset/ going my way// Auch für die Entdeckung grammatikalischer Unstimmigkeiten bin ich dankbar!