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Hallo,
ich möchte euch einen Text von mir vorstellen und eure meinung dazu hören.Es ist kein normaler Text mit Strophe,Refrain,Strophe und so,sondern ein erzählerrischer Text.
Viel Spaß beim lesen!
Thomen
My darkest dream become true,
I´ve seen the elder face,
I don´t know his name,
but I know himself.
He take me with him,
but I can feel the swaying of a dragon-fly.
The mighty wings I see, are red and dark.
We reached the hills of stone.
With speed of light, the dragon fly.
It´s a feeling like falling.
A rewarding faint including me.
And all things around me fading away like lightning.
Hours passing like minutes and days like hours.
But the peace won´t stay.
The time has come to fight against the Black Ones around me.
I will take my sword, but it´s lost.
The night are falling in this land of wood.
Now I´m alone in darkness.
Only the dragon leads me through the night.
But I still feel the black beasts beside me.
Cries behind me and mournings in front of me.
The beasts flying faster and faster...
My last hope is gone now.
The right Wing is already missing...
Not only the night is falling, we also now.
Deeper and deeper, the dragon fall.
Then I wake up in the woods.
Silence - everywhere around me...
But the night is still here.
I search the dragon, but I can´t find him.
The wind blows through the boughs of the trees.
It´s a kind of mourning... again.
Trolls, dwarves and elfes watching me.
They stay behind the trees.
I reach a clearing.
But something is wrong...
Then I look behind me.
The woods are went away.
Then I look forward again...
Also the clearing went away.
Now there´s a huge wasteland in front of me.
I travel on...
I´m going quietly and fast.
But I hear the Cries again.
The black ones are over me in the skies.
Now I´m running for my life...
Running and hiding,
now I stand still...silence
They went away
Silence all around me.
But my Journey doesn´t ending.
A maiden with pale-white skin and golden hair appears...
She take my hand and said: Come with me poor minstrel!
Her black horse, called Brinion, cross our way to the Castle
Now we´re riding through the empty night-silence...
A new day´s dawning...
We reached the castle.
The Maiden have tears in her eyes,
the Castle of Time is destroyed by the Black Ones...
We going through the piles of broken stones,
nothing but dust and ashes are out here in this misery.
She look to the sky and cast a spell...
Now the end of my hopes starts to rising:
This way was a trap...
The Black Ones appear again...
She´s the mistress of this evil creatures.
They hunting me through the wastelands and forests...
In this time, everyday is an unending nightmare
I can´t sleep at night, because I can feel them behind me.
Only in the shadows of the trees I´m feeling safe.
I wandering at night when no one can see me...
And I don´t know where this torture ends.
Then, in the woods at the southern mountainside:
A red Wizard appears in front of me.
He said: I will guard you, poor minstrel!
In the first moment I thought, that this was another trap.
But he fighted by my side in the darkest moments of the next time...
One time, he even banned the Black Ones for a while.
This happends at the COLD LAKE WHERE THE SPEAKING TREES GROW...
In the upcoming night I can´t sleep,
I look at his right arm and know what is going on in this dark our of this silent night.
His right arm is deformed.
I see my vision so clear!
THE RED DRAGON IS REINCARNATED IN THIS MYSTIC WIZARD.
On the next day we slowly travel on...
ich möchte euch einen Text von mir vorstellen und eure meinung dazu hören.Es ist kein normaler Text mit Strophe,Refrain,Strophe und so,sondern ein erzählerrischer Text.
Viel Spaß beim lesen!
Thomen

My darkest dream become true,
I´ve seen the elder face,
I don´t know his name,
but I know himself.
He take me with him,
but I can feel the swaying of a dragon-fly.
The mighty wings I see, are red and dark.
We reached the hills of stone.
With speed of light, the dragon fly.
It´s a feeling like falling.
A rewarding faint including me.
And all things around me fading away like lightning.
Hours passing like minutes and days like hours.
But the peace won´t stay.
The time has come to fight against the Black Ones around me.
I will take my sword, but it´s lost.
The night are falling in this land of wood.
Now I´m alone in darkness.
Only the dragon leads me through the night.
But I still feel the black beasts beside me.
Cries behind me and mournings in front of me.
The beasts flying faster and faster...
My last hope is gone now.
The right Wing is already missing...
Not only the night is falling, we also now.
Deeper and deeper, the dragon fall.
Then I wake up in the woods.
Silence - everywhere around me...
But the night is still here.
I search the dragon, but I can´t find him.
The wind blows through the boughs of the trees.
It´s a kind of mourning... again.
Trolls, dwarves and elfes watching me.
They stay behind the trees.
I reach a clearing.
But something is wrong...
Then I look behind me.
The woods are went away.
Then I look forward again...
Also the clearing went away.
Now there´s a huge wasteland in front of me.
I travel on...
I´m going quietly and fast.
But I hear the Cries again.
The black ones are over me in the skies.
Now I´m running for my life...
Running and hiding,
now I stand still...silence
They went away
Silence all around me.
But my Journey doesn´t ending.
A maiden with pale-white skin and golden hair appears...
She take my hand and said: Come with me poor minstrel!
Her black horse, called Brinion, cross our way to the Castle
Now we´re riding through the empty night-silence...
A new day´s dawning...
We reached the castle.
The Maiden have tears in her eyes,
the Castle of Time is destroyed by the Black Ones...
We going through the piles of broken stones,
nothing but dust and ashes are out here in this misery.
She look to the sky and cast a spell...
Now the end of my hopes starts to rising:
This way was a trap...
The Black Ones appear again...
She´s the mistress of this evil creatures.
They hunting me through the wastelands and forests...
In this time, everyday is an unending nightmare
I can´t sleep at night, because I can feel them behind me.
Only in the shadows of the trees I´m feeling safe.
I wandering at night when no one can see me...
And I don´t know where this torture ends.
Then, in the woods at the southern mountainside:
A red Wizard appears in front of me.
He said: I will guard you, poor minstrel!
In the first moment I thought, that this was another trap.
But he fighted by my side in the darkest moments of the next time...
One time, he even banned the Black Ones for a while.
This happends at the COLD LAKE WHERE THE SPEAKING TREES GROW...
In the upcoming night I can´t sleep,
I look at his right arm and know what is going on in this dark our of this silent night.
His right arm is deformed.
I see my vision so clear!
THE RED DRAGON IS REINCARNATED IN THIS MYSTIC WIZARD.
On the next day we slowly travel on...