
martinexe
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hey!
hab neulich nen neuen Song geschrieben, ist noch nicht aufgenommen.
Eigentlich bin ich kein Fan davon, sich nur dem Text, ohne Musik, zu widmen, aber was solls xD
Wäre cool, wenn ihr mir mal eure Meinung geigen würdet
Soll son Acoustic pop/rock song werden.
"Tell me girl, how would you like it
If I stopped by tonight
It is dark, so dark out-side
but you are my dayly sun-light
I just wanna see you smiling cause my day was hella boring
(Your good) mood is a boost fooooor my will
to sur-vive this world - a military drill
I'm living of you -------- living a great life
Soo, does this sound to you,
like a melody of a flute?
like a lovely piano tune,
or does it - just sound rude?
hey, girl, how would you like it
if I stopped by tonight
We could just watch a movie
laying side by side
I bet that would make you smile for a pretty long while
You'll need to answer fast cause I'm already drivin by
Just give me a call, please don't deny...
hey, girl, how would you like it
if I stopped by tonight
We could just have a great time
hand in hand and side by side"
Was haltet ihr davon?
Dankeschön! =)
Grüße
MadDin
hab neulich nen neuen Song geschrieben, ist noch nicht aufgenommen.
Eigentlich bin ich kein Fan davon, sich nur dem Text, ohne Musik, zu widmen, aber was solls xD
Wäre cool, wenn ihr mir mal eure Meinung geigen würdet
Soll son Acoustic pop/rock song werden.
"Tell me girl, how would you like it
If I stopped by tonight
It is dark, so dark out-side
but you are my dayly sun-light
I just wanna see you smiling cause my day was hella boring
(Your good) mood is a boost fooooor my will
to sur-vive this world - a military drill
I'm living of you -------- living a great life
Soo, does this sound to you,
like a melody of a flute?
like a lovely piano tune,
or does it - just sound rude?
hey, girl, how would you like it
if I stopped by tonight
We could just watch a movie
laying side by side
I bet that would make you smile for a pretty long while
You'll need to answer fast cause I'm already drivin by
Just give me a call, please don't deny...
hey, girl, how would you like it
if I stopped by tonight
We could just have a great time
hand in hand and side by side"
Was haltet ihr davon?
Dankeschön! =)
Grüße
MadDin