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Hi,
ich schreib seit etwa einem Monat Lieder und da ich keine unparteiische Kritik von Bekannten erwarten kann, dacht ich mir dass es das Beste sei, mal in einem Forum meine Texte zu Posten.
Dies sind meine zwei besten.
Beim ersten sei die Ironie zu beachten...
Beim zweiten hab ich versucht mal ein bisschen mit Metaphern zu arbeiten. Vom Textmäßigen arbeite ich sehr auf den Stil von Serj Tankian hin(nein, kopieren will ich ihn natürlich nicht, aber ich liebe einfach seine Wortwahl und die Vieldeutigkeit)
Bedtime Stories
I’m against it! I guess…
Let me be the one who is against it all
Let me be the one who is against it till the fall
Let me be the one to be different
Let me be the one who does what other’s don’t!
I’m the one who leads the revolution
I’m the one who arouses the discussion
I’m the one who breaks the union
I’m the one who has the right opinion
Refrain:
I am the new generation,
I am the youth of the nation,
And I’m against it!
I am the new way of thinking
I am a new light blinking
And I’m against it all!
Let me be the one who is against it all,
Let me be the one going down with it’s fall,
Let me be the other’s parrot,
I open my mouth to make noise with it!
I’m the one who’s in the first row!
I’m the one to go where others don’t go!
I’m the one who’s the other’s bitch!
I’m the one who’s spreading other’s words!
Refrain
Your opinion is my opinion,
Together we’ll change the world!
Anyway, that’s it,
Who cares if I’m talking shit?
It’s fine for me and I have to have something to be against
So I can sleep well at night.
Let me be the one who is against it all
Let me be the one who is against it till the fall
Let me be the one to be different
Let me be the one who does what other’s don’t!
Autopilot
Let it flood you
Can you feel it seeking it’s way
All it’s way through your body
Conversion, Software version 11.0
Twitch with this feeling of a headache
It’s over now
It has to go
And it’s over for f’sake
Gather your thoughts,
Although they’ve seem to become useless,
Gather them, right now
It’s the only chance getting out of there
Refrain:
Coming from within,
Can you feel it?
It’s coming from within.
Inside you.
The seed meets the fertile ground
Your heart is pumping it through your veins.
The words are hypnotizing you
You’re feeling light and free
Coming out of your flesh and feel your spirit
Taking off, winding up in circles
Gather your thoughts,
Although they’ve seem to become useless,
Gather them, right now
It’s the only chance out there
Refrain
Bridge:
It has become a part of you
And you are not a part of it
It’s the actions that have to fit
It has become a part of you
And you are not a part of it
It’s the actions that have to fit
Refrain
Wär sehr dankbar für Anmerkungen und Kritik aller Art
ich schreib seit etwa einem Monat Lieder und da ich keine unparteiische Kritik von Bekannten erwarten kann, dacht ich mir dass es das Beste sei, mal in einem Forum meine Texte zu Posten.
Dies sind meine zwei besten.
Beim ersten sei die Ironie zu beachten...
Beim zweiten hab ich versucht mal ein bisschen mit Metaphern zu arbeiten. Vom Textmäßigen arbeite ich sehr auf den Stil von Serj Tankian hin(nein, kopieren will ich ihn natürlich nicht, aber ich liebe einfach seine Wortwahl und die Vieldeutigkeit)
Bedtime Stories
I’m against it! I guess…
Let me be the one who is against it all
Let me be the one who is against it till the fall
Let me be the one to be different
Let me be the one who does what other’s don’t!
I’m the one who leads the revolution
I’m the one who arouses the discussion
I’m the one who breaks the union
I’m the one who has the right opinion
Refrain:
I am the new generation,
I am the youth of the nation,
And I’m against it!
I am the new way of thinking
I am a new light blinking
And I’m against it all!
Let me be the one who is against it all,
Let me be the one going down with it’s fall,
Let me be the other’s parrot,
I open my mouth to make noise with it!
I’m the one who’s in the first row!
I’m the one to go where others don’t go!
I’m the one who’s the other’s bitch!
I’m the one who’s spreading other’s words!
Refrain
Your opinion is my opinion,
Together we’ll change the world!
Anyway, that’s it,
Who cares if I’m talking shit?
It’s fine for me and I have to have something to be against
So I can sleep well at night.
Let me be the one who is against it all
Let me be the one who is against it till the fall
Let me be the one to be different
Let me be the one who does what other’s don’t!
Autopilot
Let it flood you
Can you feel it seeking it’s way
All it’s way through your body
Conversion, Software version 11.0
Twitch with this feeling of a headache
It’s over now
It has to go
And it’s over for f’sake
Gather your thoughts,
Although they’ve seem to become useless,
Gather them, right now
It’s the only chance getting out of there
Refrain:
Coming from within,
Can you feel it?
It’s coming from within.
Inside you.
The seed meets the fertile ground
Your heart is pumping it through your veins.
The words are hypnotizing you
You’re feeling light and free
Coming out of your flesh and feel your spirit
Taking off, winding up in circles
Gather your thoughts,
Although they’ve seem to become useless,
Gather them, right now
It’s the only chance out there
Refrain
Bridge:
It has become a part of you
And you are not a part of it
It’s the actions that have to fit
It has become a part of you
And you are not a part of it
It’s the actions that have to fit
Refrain
Wär sehr dankbar für Anmerkungen und Kritik aller Art