Noone knows

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She throws on her make-up,
preparing for the dance,
gonna stay up all night
drinking with friends.

Noone knows how shes broken inside,
noone knows the way she dies
everyday
- for the rest of her life [maybe]

He is all that she can't forget,
she tries to drink him away
but that never helps
He is all that she can't get over,
she tries to cry him away
but still shes hurting...

Now shes laughing out loud,
shes flirting around,
seems as if shes enjoying
the life that she's found

Noone knows that shes fallin' apart,
noone knows the way she cries
everynight
- in her sleep [and even in her dreams]

He is all that she can't forget,
she tries to dance him away
but that never helps
He is all that she can't get over,
she tries to scream him away
but still she's hurting...
 
Bitte um Rückmeldungen zu meinem 1. Songtext ! :)
Danke im Voraus und ganz liebe Grüße,
Sniffy
 
hallo,

bist du männlich oder weiblich?
 
Ich hätte den Text in deutsch geschrieben, es würde sich lohnen.
 
@Holgi:

Da mußte aber einige Seichtheiten der deutschen Sprache gekonnt umschiffen.
 
"the life that she's found" ist grammatikalisch falsch, "the life that she had found", du kannst nicht Gegenwart mit Vergangenheit mischen.


"but still she's hurting" bedeutet: sie verletzt noch immer/jetzt gerade.
Ich denke du möchtest sagen Sie ist immer noch verletzt: "But still she is hurted"

lg
 

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