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Ich versuch grad einen denglishen Text aufzupolieren. Dabei ist das raus gekommen:
Keep on running
Sometimes the sky is grey,
sometimes the grass is brown.
Your schedule governs the day
but still is nothing done.
Sometimes you just feel sick,
sometimes you cannot feel.
Your best friend is a chick,
and you, you gotta deal.
... if your life is blocking your way.
That is all I gotta say:
Just keep on running.
You think your life's a mess,
you think you can't go on.
Left in your loneliness
you fight, you must be strong.
…and all you want is to break free.
That is what you have to see:
Just keep on running.
Just keep on running,
keep going on,
keep pushing,
you'll see you're very strong.
…don’t let the world throw you out of the show.
That is all you have to know:
Just keep on running.
Just keep on running.
Gibt es aus Sicht von Englischkennern hierzu etwas zu sagen? Gravierende Fehler, etc.?
Gruß
L.
Keep on running
Sometimes the sky is grey,
sometimes the grass is brown.
Your schedule governs the day
but still is nothing done.
Sometimes you just feel sick,
sometimes you cannot feel.
Your best friend is a chick,
and you, you gotta deal.
... if your life is blocking your way.
That is all I gotta say:
Just keep on running.
You think your life's a mess,
you think you can't go on.
Left in your loneliness
you fight, you must be strong.
…and all you want is to break free.
That is what you have to see:
Just keep on running.
Just keep on running,
keep going on,
keep pushing,
you'll see you're very strong.
…don’t let the world throw you out of the show.
That is all you have to know:
Just keep on running.
Just keep on running.
Gibt es aus Sicht von Englischkennern hierzu etwas zu sagen? Gravierende Fehler, etc.?
Gruß
L.