
jewe123
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Hallo jetzt möchte ich Euch mal einen Text von mir vorstellen. Der Song ist schon etwas älter, aber ich will ihn jetzt bald aufnehmen und da wollte ich erst mal [g=94]feedback[/g] haben, damit ich vielleicht noch was verbessern kann, also:
Hide `n Seek
First it was nothing
But a silly game to play.
By the time she came to know the rules,
The thrill had gone away
Now everything just seems so dull
And her days are cold and bleak.
She´s desperately loving
And playing hide `n seek.
Desperately loving
And playing hide `n seek.
They say that love can conquer all.
They say that love is blind.
She says that love´s a dagger,
Stabbing you from behind.
When she says "it doesn´t matter",
She sounds just like a freak,
With her feelings torn and tattered
From playing hide `n seek.
Feelings torn and tattered
From playing hide `n seek
Bridge:
She can´t forget that evening,
When the feeling got too strong.
And ever since she knows
Two rights can make a wrong
In a dream she had a vision
That keeps coming back these days:
There´s a white yawl out there waiting
to take her across the waves.
And she feels the warm wind blowing
So tender and so meek.
And she swears as she´s leaving
There´ll be no more hide`n seek.
She swears as she´s leaving
There´ll be no more hide `n seek.
Jetzt schon mal ganz herzlichen Dank für jeden Beitrag.
Gruss
Jens
Hide `n Seek
First it was nothing
But a silly game to play.
By the time she came to know the rules,
The thrill had gone away
Now everything just seems so dull
And her days are cold and bleak.
She´s desperately loving
And playing hide `n seek.
Desperately loving
And playing hide `n seek.
They say that love can conquer all.
They say that love is blind.
She says that love´s a dagger,
Stabbing you from behind.
When she says "it doesn´t matter",
She sounds just like a freak,
With her feelings torn and tattered
From playing hide `n seek.
Feelings torn and tattered
From playing hide `n seek
Bridge:
She can´t forget that evening,
When the feeling got too strong.
And ever since she knows
Two rights can make a wrong
In a dream she had a vision
That keeps coming back these days:
There´s a white yawl out there waiting
to take her across the waves.
And she feels the warm wind blowing
So tender and so meek.
And she swears as she´s leaving
There´ll be no more hide`n seek.
She swears as she´s leaving
There´ll be no more hide `n seek.
Jetzt schon mal ganz herzlichen Dank für jeden Beitrag.
Gruss
Jens