Alten Text neu und besser?

[EOD]

Oder so?

fallen angel, no regret
no way to life, no way back
see the true face of eden
and look behind the curtain

lost your love, lost my soul
no way back to heaven
haunted by despair and no hope
a perfect hell with a faithful god

all the disappointments is not destiny
tired my heart, empty my view
empty my life, i'm taking the last gasp
don't believe in paradise

fallen angel, no regrets
no way to paradise, no way back
view the true face of heaven
so take it and die

chorus
you're my darling
you're my angel
you are my death
finish life and celebrating death (gefällt mir nicht mehr...)

 

[Saurus]

all the disappointments is not destiny

Hier muss glaube ich are hin.
Und vllt. statt not einfach no.
Und the würde ich auch unter den Tisch fallen lassen.

finally: All disappointments are no destiny.

 

[EOD]

Ok, ich dachte mir da schon sowas. Wie isses mit dem Versuch in #20?

 

[EOD]

Hatte über FB den Text mal in den USA. Das war die Antwort:

Death In Paradise

fallen angel, no regret
no way to life, just to death
see the true face of eden
and look behind the curtain

lost your love, lost my soul
finding pain up to heaven
haunted by despair, without joy (left no joy)
a perfect hell with a dead god

fire of sadness burns in me
tired my heart, empty my view
empty my life
taking the last gasp, die in paradise

die in hell, no regrets
no way to paradise, just to death
see the true face of hell
take it and die

chorus
you're my darling
you're my angel
you are my death
finish life and celebrating death


yeah, i think your vocal performance really seals the deal (if that is in fact you singing) i lean toward "left no joy" or "without joy" as both imply a loss "leap of joy" doesn't really work with the context of the the other lyrics


Hm, aber eigentlich stehe ich ja wieder am Anfang...