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sanirnb
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Hey leute,
ich habe mal einen song um die liebe geschrieben
der song ist auf englisch und geht in richtung pop/rnb
also ich bitte gerne um verbesserungsvorschläge!
der letze satz im song ist halt ein satz der am ende gesagt wird
gehört also nicht in den gesangparts
was findet ihr gut und was schlecht?
seing you happy makes me cry
cause i know i ´m not the reason why
every thought so close to give up
every moment i am feeling the distance between us
dont you feel it? i am selfish and afraid
thinking about you and him
wishing you were here by me
makes me losing my mind
we used to be a team,
we lived like we hit the jackpot
so look into my eyes, say you want me, say you need me
please come back to me
i really miss ya, i just wanna kiss ya
take my hand, show me your love
let me be the one gives you hope and protection
lets come together and
makes the darkness turns to light
future girl listen,
you can stop playing hide and seek now
your the reason i am smiling all day
can we turn back a hands of time
take my hand, show me your love
let me be the one gives you hope and protection
lets come together and
makes the darkness turns to light
now tell me
do you remember writing on facebook all night long
dont you know watching the sunrise every day
buts its over now
how can i love when you confuse and ignore?
please dont forget me....
ich habe mal einen song um die liebe geschrieben
der song ist auf englisch und geht in richtung pop/rnb
also ich bitte gerne um verbesserungsvorschläge!
der letze satz im song ist halt ein satz der am ende gesagt wird
was findet ihr gut und was schlecht?
seing you happy makes me cry
cause i know i ´m not the reason why
every thought so close to give up
every moment i am feeling the distance between us
dont you feel it? i am selfish and afraid
thinking about you and him
wishing you were here by me
makes me losing my mind
we used to be a team,
we lived like we hit the jackpot
so look into my eyes, say you want me, say you need me
please come back to me
i really miss ya, i just wanna kiss ya
take my hand, show me your love
let me be the one gives you hope and protection
lets come together and
makes the darkness turns to light
future girl listen,
you can stop playing hide and seek now
your the reason i am smiling all day
can we turn back a hands of time
take my hand, show me your love
let me be the one gives you hope and protection
lets come together and
makes the darkness turns to light
now tell me
do you remember writing on facebook all night long
dont you know watching the sunrise every day
buts its over now
how can i love when you confuse and ignore?
please dont forget me....