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Sooo, nachdem Mitch_the_bitch in diesem Thread nach kreativen Interpreten gefragt hat wollte ich meine dazugehörigen Text noch schnell von euch Korrektur gelesen haben wollen.
Es wird tatsächlich in Richtung Nu Metal gehn, wobei ich selbst sehr auf das Endergebnis gespannt bin da ich das auch zum ersten Mal machen werde.
Inspiriert für diesen Text hat mich übrigens meine Lektüre "Fabian" von Erich Kästner, in dem es um einen unverbesserlichen Moralisten geht der bereits den Weltuntergang heraufbeschwört und das Ende der Menschheit kommen sieht.
Frage ist:
1. Macht das alles so einigermaßen seinen Sinn?
2. Sind noch böse Fehler zu finden?
The end of the world:
You say that the moon will be shining for tonight
and the stars will be glaring brightly, right?
but I don't care what you say, cause I see the world behind
this curtain that makes you f#ckin' blind
Believe me
It's all just a lie
Don't you see
Get out of your shut-eye
[g=52]Chorus[/g]:
Away from this disaster
We have to run faster
Don't wait for the end of the world
The end of the world is here
Decay is everywhere
and I don't know where to go 'cause the society is gay
destructing you is a pleasure for me
and the only thing i do is wanting you to go
[g=52]Chorus[/g]:
Away from this disaster
We have to run faster
Don't wait for the end of the world
Someday you will understand
that my weak and freaking attitude is just the only truth
Cause I don't mind that the Santa will be here
When a thousand children die and you don't care about their ruth
[g=52]Chorus[/g]
<i>Believe me
It's all just a lie
Don't you see
Get out of your shut-eye</i>
[g=52]Chorus[/g]
They may
say that everything will be so fine
and the politics are presaging the lowering of crime
But what you see is what you get
The dumbing down hasn't finished yet
[g=52]Chorus[/g]
Resting here could be a dilution
Cause what should I expect from hell
Heaven on earth is an illusion
the devil wants me here to tell
[g=52]Chorus[/g]
Obey my words when you face it
that noone replace it
Cause that is the end of the world
Es wird tatsächlich in Richtung Nu Metal gehn, wobei ich selbst sehr auf das Endergebnis gespannt bin da ich das auch zum ersten Mal machen werde.
Inspiriert für diesen Text hat mich übrigens meine Lektüre "Fabian" von Erich Kästner, in dem es um einen unverbesserlichen Moralisten geht der bereits den Weltuntergang heraufbeschwört und das Ende der Menschheit kommen sieht.
Frage ist:
1. Macht das alles so einigermaßen seinen Sinn?
2. Sind noch böse Fehler zu finden?
The end of the world:
You say that the moon will be shining for tonight
and the stars will be glaring brightly, right?
but I don't care what you say, cause I see the world behind
this curtain that makes you f#ckin' blind
Believe me
It's all just a lie
Don't you see
Get out of your shut-eye
[g=52]Chorus[/g]:
Away from this disaster
We have to run faster
Don't wait for the end of the world
The end of the world is here
Decay is everywhere
and I don't know where to go 'cause the society is gay
destructing you is a pleasure for me
and the only thing i do is wanting you to go
[g=52]Chorus[/g]:
Away from this disaster
We have to run faster
Don't wait for the end of the world
Someday you will understand
that my weak and freaking attitude is just the only truth
Cause I don't mind that the Santa will be here
When a thousand children die and you don't care about their ruth
[g=52]Chorus[/g]
<i>Believe me
It's all just a lie
Don't you see
Get out of your shut-eye</i>
[g=52]Chorus[/g]
They may
say that everything will be so fine
and the politics are presaging the lowering of crime
But what you see is what you get
The dumbing down hasn't finished yet
[g=52]Chorus[/g]
Resting here could be a dilution
Cause what should I expect from hell
Heaven on earth is an illusion
the devil wants me here to tell
[g=52]Chorus[/g]
Obey my words when you face it
that noone replace it
Cause that is the end of the world