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TexterBernd
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Die Musik (und Aufnahme) ist nicht von mir, sondern von Craig. Ich wäre trotzdem an Reaktionen interessiert, selbst wenn Country in Deutschland nicht gerade sehr gefragt ist (in den USA ist das der größte Musikmarkt). Ich selbst hätte auch nie gedacht, dass mein Text für Country geeignet sein könnte - hatte mehr an Hardrock gedacht. Craig und ich haben den Text mehrmals umgeschrieben - auch mit Hilfe weiterer freundlicher "native speakers", und Craig hat am Schluß auch noch Passagen umgestellt, damit der Text mit seiner Musik harmoniert.
Hier das Ergebnis:
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11174336
Und hier der Text (ich weiß, falsches Forum, ich möchte ein Doppel-Posting vermeiden):
My freedom ends at your factory door
You got me from 5 to 4
You’re in power - I do my job
I'm working hard, but you're not God
You pay the wage, you call the tune
I’m just someone that you consume
While that holds true for the working hours
At quitting time you lose your power
You may think you can talk down to me
You may think you can lay down the law
You base your views on presumption
But your theories got a flaw
I'll take it on the nose
I'll take it on the chin
I'm on the other side
I won't give in
I'm not your slave
I'm not your kin
I've got my pride
I won't give in
My hardship ends at closing time
I've got no intent to social climb
I just enjoy my evening beer
When I'm talking with my peers
You may think you can talk down to me
You may think you can lay down the law
You base your views on presumption
But your theories got a flaw
I'll take it on the nose
I'll take it on the chin
I'm on the other side
I won't give in
I'm not your slave
I'm not your kin
I've got my pride
I won't give in
When you think you can break me
You just deceive yourself
While I am looking forward to
The time when I'll look down on you
I saw your patronizing look
Like I was a no good crook
While you're master of the universe
You see I'm just a little boss-averse
You may think you can talk down to me
You may think you can lay down the law
You base your views on presumption
But your theories got a flaw
I'll take it on the nose
I'll take it on the chin
I'm on the other side
I won't give in
I'm not your slave
I'm not your kin
I've got my pride
I won't give in
I won't give in
...
Hier das Ergebnis:
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11174336
Und hier der Text (ich weiß, falsches Forum, ich möchte ein Doppel-Posting vermeiden):
My freedom ends at your factory door
You got me from 5 to 4
You’re in power - I do my job
I'm working hard, but you're not God
You pay the wage, you call the tune
I’m just someone that you consume
While that holds true for the working hours
At quitting time you lose your power
You may think you can talk down to me
You may think you can lay down the law
You base your views on presumption
But your theories got a flaw
I'll take it on the nose
I'll take it on the chin
I'm on the other side
I won't give in
I'm not your slave
I'm not your kin
I've got my pride
I won't give in
My hardship ends at closing time
I've got no intent to social climb
I just enjoy my evening beer
When I'm talking with my peers
You may think you can talk down to me
You may think you can lay down the law
You base your views on presumption
But your theories got a flaw
I'll take it on the nose
I'll take it on the chin
I'm on the other side
I won't give in
I'm not your slave
I'm not your kin
I've got my pride
I won't give in
When you think you can break me
You just deceive yourself
While I am looking forward to
The time when I'll look down on you
I saw your patronizing look
Like I was a no good crook
While you're master of the universe
You see I'm just a little boss-averse
You may think you can talk down to me
You may think you can lay down the law
You base your views on presumption
But your theories got a flaw
I'll take it on the nose
I'll take it on the chin
I'm on the other side
I won't give in
I'm not your slave
I'm not your kin
I've got my pride
I won't give in
I won't give in
...