Bitte mal folgenden Text zerpflücken!

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Moin Moin,

mein Leadgitarrist und ich haben hier einen Text der mal zerpflückt werden müsste. Bitte schonunslos alles was an Fehlern drin ist bemängeln.

The heir of light

Strophe1:
Taken by the dark Lord
The Princess of light
A laughter in the black land
And taken was her child

The son of hope was stolen
From a virgins waist
To grow up in the darkness
And learn to be two-faced

Forsaken was the white throne
It’s owner learns to lie
And planted to his mind was,
That mortal men shall die

Forgotten was the doomed son
Eternal tales of woes
The demonlord the master
Of pain that no one knows


Ref.:
The poison was given / the spell was pronounced
Devoted to darkness / the heir of the light


Strophe2:
His fate was sealed by darkness
In a land you go insane
Foretold was his live
A live that’s full of pain

In his dreams he suffers
He never will return
Bound to face his destiny
The flames of hope still burn

Poison in his veins
Brought excstasy in blood
His father has told him
His mother was a slut

Demonlords have teached him
To feed his hungry sword
In tainted rites he has to
Prais his mighty lord

spoken:
So the prince of the dark lands grow. Clearly his future lies before him. To defend the sword and to help his father rise to supreme power!

Strophe3:
He doesn’t know all secrets
Of the mighty blade
Hidden in an abyss
He knows there lies his fate

This power in the dakness
Took slowly the control
Greed, distrust and misery
Tormenting his soul

The old blood in his vains
Still strong but cold it flows
The virus of hatred
Was everything he knows

Hunted by doubts
And every night he screams
A beautyful woman
whispring in his dreams
 
Nur Fehler?

Ich finde den Text viel zu lang....oder ist das so in dem Stil gewollt?

Gruß
Nordwolf
 
Der Text wird im Song relativ schnell gesungen. Insofern ist das schon gewollt.
 

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