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Dieses Thema im Forum "Songtexte" wurde erstellt von MightyWarrior, 16.11.08.

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  1. MightyWarrior

    MightyWarrior Themenersteller

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    Moin Moin,

    mein Leadgitarrist und ich haben hier einen Text der mal zerpflückt werden müsste. Bitte schonunslos alles was an Fehlern drin ist bemängeln.

    The heir of light

    Strophe1:
    Taken by the dark Lord
    The Princess of light
    A laughter in the black land
    And taken was her child

    The son of hope was stolen
    From a virgins waist
    To grow up in the darkness
    And learn to be two-faced

    Forsaken was the white throne
    It’s owner learns to lie
    And planted to his mind was,
    That mortal men shall die

    Forgotten was the doomed son
    Eternal tales of woes
    The demonlord the master
    Of pain that no one knows


    Ref.:
    The poison was given / the spell was pronounced
    Devoted to darkness / the heir of the light


    Strophe2:
    His fate was sealed by darkness
    In a land you go insane
    Foretold was his live
    A live that’s full of pain

    In his dreams he suffers
    He never will return
    Bound to face his destiny
    The flames of hope still burn

    Poison in his veins
    Brought excstasy in blood
    His father has told him
    His mother was a slut

    Demonlords have teached him
    To feed his hungry sword
    In tainted rites he has to
    Prais his mighty lord

    spoken:
    So the prince of the dark lands grow. Clearly his future lies before him. To defend the sword and to help his father rise to supreme power!

    Strophe3:
    He doesn’t know all secrets
    Of the mighty blade
    Hidden in an abyss
    He knows there lies his fate

    This power in the dakness
    Took slowly the control
    Greed, distrust and misery
    Tormenting his soul

    The old blood in his vains
    Still strong but cold it flows
    The virus of hatred
    Was everything he knows

    Hunted by doubts
    And every night he screams
    A beautyful woman
    whispring in his dreams
     
    MightyWarrior, 16.11.08
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  2. Nordwolf

    Nordwolf

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    Nur Fehler?

    Ich finde den Text viel zu lang....oder ist das so in dem Stil gewollt?

    Gruß
    Nordwolf
     
    Nordwolf, 16.11.08
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  3. MightyWarrior

    MightyWarrior Themenersteller

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    Der Text wird im Song relativ schnell gesungen. Insofern ist das schon gewollt.
     
    MightyWarrior, 16.11.08
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