Ja "strong and gleaming" klingt besser.
Überlege noch ob sich für "gleaming" noch was schöneres findet.
Hardrock / Gothic ja, aber eher langsam
https://soundcloud.com/deadlyentertainment/june-grundidee-test/s-Ppkag
June
Sometimes i dream i see you
in nights with a full shining moon
our love is strong and gleaming
like the hottest nights in June
Oh... In June, June, June i'm in heaven
In June, June, June i'm in heaven
In June, June, June i'm in heaven
In June, in June, in June i'm in heaven...
I would take you in my arms
and it feels like heaven
if your body´s close to mine
I will lose control again
Oh... In June, June, June i'm in heaven
In June, June, June i'm in heaven
In June, June, June i'm in heaven
In June, in June, in June i'm in heaven...
Break ?
Oh... In June, June, June i'm in heaven
In June, June, June i'm in heaven
In June, June, June i'm in heaven
In June, in June, in June i'm in heaven...
In June ... i'm in heaven
In June... this feels like heaven