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Wenn man die Kritiken hier so über die anderen Songtexte liest kriegt man ja richtig Angst seine hier reinzustellen 
War nur´n Gag, Kritik kommt mir sogar zugute. Ich stell jetzt einfach mal nen angefangenen Text von mir rein. Wäre insbesondere für grammatikalische Korrekturen, oder Hinweise auf Korrekturmöglichkeiten dankbar.
A few time has been past and we´re still together, there´s a gift I can´t give cause you think it´s forever
But a feeling in me say me that I´m quite sure, that I will leave you in time and I hope it´s a cure
I´m sorry to dis-enchant you and heast hopes, as yet it´s my secret that you will me lost
I´m too much of a coward to tell you the truth, I know that you will cry I know that you´ll feel used,
The scene that i play is out of pity for you, I play it so great I´d never gave you a clue
When our lips are contact I feel nothing within, when you´re hand touch my face I would speak but I can´t
My heart shouts the truth but you are deaf for this, I can not comprehend how it came like it is
The love was running away running faster than me, the daily routine makes me to blind to see
When you ask me if I feel alright I say sure, I mean “no” but I can´t say it loud I feel poor
It´s a friendship between you and me nothing more, but you think it is love makes me feel insecure
If I done the right to gave a promise that hurt, that I can´t observe that makes me straining my nerves
I feel wrath for myself I didn´t earlier react, but now the time passes and I can´t turn it back
[g=52]Chorus[/g]:
I will break your heart but I can´t fix it, don´t wanna hurt your feelings, but now I did it
I would comprehend if you hate me forever, I promise you a chance that I didn´t observe now
Ich denke den [g=52]Chorus[/g] werd ich noch ändern der is nix...
War nur´n Gag, Kritik kommt mir sogar zugute. Ich stell jetzt einfach mal nen angefangenen Text von mir rein. Wäre insbesondere für grammatikalische Korrekturen, oder Hinweise auf Korrekturmöglichkeiten dankbar.
A few time has been past and we´re still together, there´s a gift I can´t give cause you think it´s forever
But a feeling in me say me that I´m quite sure, that I will leave you in time and I hope it´s a cure
I´m sorry to dis-enchant you and heast hopes, as yet it´s my secret that you will me lost
I´m too much of a coward to tell you the truth, I know that you will cry I know that you´ll feel used,
The scene that i play is out of pity for you, I play it so great I´d never gave you a clue
When our lips are contact I feel nothing within, when you´re hand touch my face I would speak but I can´t
My heart shouts the truth but you are deaf for this, I can not comprehend how it came like it is
The love was running away running faster than me, the daily routine makes me to blind to see
When you ask me if I feel alright I say sure, I mean “no” but I can´t say it loud I feel poor
It´s a friendship between you and me nothing more, but you think it is love makes me feel insecure
If I done the right to gave a promise that hurt, that I can´t observe that makes me straining my nerves
I feel wrath for myself I didn´t earlier react, but now the time passes and I can´t turn it back
[g=52]Chorus[/g]:
I will break your heart but I can´t fix it, don´t wanna hurt your feelings, but now I did it
I would comprehend if you hate me forever, I promise you a chance that I didn´t observe now
Ich denke den [g=52]Chorus[/g] werd ich noch ändern der is nix...