
Maver0ck
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Hi,
habe mit nem Freund zusammen nen Text geschrieben.
Wir waren uns aber nicht so sicher ob der Text so wie wir ihn
geschrieben haben Sinn macht. Wäre cool wenn ihr uns ein [g=94]Feedback[/g]
oder Hilfestellung leisten könntet. In dem Text geht es darum ein Packt
mit dem Teufel zu schliessen. Hier also der Text:
Vers 1:
a fire that burns so bright
my soul is crying.
it rains,
while the sun is shining.
my body´s broken.
my heart is in flames,
and the last words were spoken.
Vers 2:
you sold your soul
in a big war
you´ve lost control.
you loose your mind,
god semms to be bad,
devil seems to be kind.
[g=52]Chorus[/g]:
but it hurts...
and nobody can get it right
and you should be so afraid
but it hurts...
Vers 3:
you gonna lose that fight.
you should give up.
you lost your pride.
there´s no reason to be.
the enemy is getting closer.
you´ll never be free!!!
[g=52]Chorus[/g]:
but it hurts...
and nobody can get it right
and you should be so afraid
but it hurts...
Vers 4:
the blades are cutting.
the night is dark.
your guts are glutting.
the bullets kissing,
my arm and feet.
god isn´t missing
your fall so deep!!!
Bridge:
but than the other day
when everything falls away
everything is becomming black
you should drawback
you said it was a mistake
but now it's to late
[g=52]Chorus[/g]:
But it hurts...
and nobody can get it right
and you should be so afraid
But it hurts...
habe mit nem Freund zusammen nen Text geschrieben.
Wir waren uns aber nicht so sicher ob der Text so wie wir ihn
geschrieben haben Sinn macht. Wäre cool wenn ihr uns ein [g=94]Feedback[/g]
oder Hilfestellung leisten könntet. In dem Text geht es darum ein Packt
mit dem Teufel zu schliessen. Hier also der Text:
Vers 1:
a fire that burns so bright
my soul is crying.
it rains,
while the sun is shining.
my body´s broken.
my heart is in flames,
and the last words were spoken.
Vers 2:
you sold your soul
in a big war
you´ve lost control.
you loose your mind,
god semms to be bad,
devil seems to be kind.
[g=52]Chorus[/g]:
but it hurts...
and nobody can get it right
and you should be so afraid
but it hurts...
Vers 3:
you gonna lose that fight.
you should give up.
you lost your pride.
there´s no reason to be.
the enemy is getting closer.
you´ll never be free!!!
[g=52]Chorus[/g]:
but it hurts...
and nobody can get it right
and you should be so afraid
but it hurts...
Vers 4:
the blades are cutting.
the night is dark.
your guts are glutting.
the bullets kissing,
my arm and feet.
god isn´t missing
your fall so deep!!!
Bridge:
but than the other day
when everything falls away
everything is becomming black
you should drawback
you said it was a mistake
but now it's to late
[g=52]Chorus[/g]:
But it hurts...
and nobody can get it right
and you should be so afraid
But it hurts...