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So das ist mein Neuester Text. Bitte um Kritik und grammatikalische Korrekturen
My being was always nearly, but now it´s running out of reach,
The clocks are count my last hours, and god speaks a deadly speech
The kids are always praying, but there´s no answer from himself
I didn´t get a last chance ,no helping hand from someone else
I can´t find the right words, to say goodbye for now and forever,
I will lose you the second time, open your heart give me a shelter,
There´s waiting a cold place, my fear is growing up in bad thoughts,
The blackness looking in my face, my hope is going away in this part
My hands are to weak to dry your tears, to stroke your cheek,
I want to confess my love, But now I´m going to fall asleep,
The darkness turns into light, my grip gets softer in your hand,
My last breath are take away ,I wanna pray but My lips are can´t
[g=52]Chorus[/g]:
I´m look at you with bleared eyes, you hold my shaking hand,
And I feel so much tired, i try to stay awake as long as I can,
But if I fall asleep, I´ll waiting for you - don´t cry
Goodbye, have a nice live
My being was always nearly, but now it´s running out of reach,
The clocks are count my last hours, and god speaks a deadly speech
The kids are always praying, but there´s no answer from himself
I didn´t get a last chance ,no helping hand from someone else
I can´t find the right words, to say goodbye for now and forever,
I will lose you the second time, open your heart give me a shelter,
There´s waiting a cold place, my fear is growing up in bad thoughts,
The blackness looking in my face, my hope is going away in this part
My hands are to weak to dry your tears, to stroke your cheek,
I want to confess my love, But now I´m going to fall asleep,
The darkness turns into light, my grip gets softer in your hand,
My last breath are take away ,I wanna pray but My lips are can´t
[g=52]Chorus[/g]:
I´m look at you with bleared eyes, you hold my shaking hand,
And I feel so much tired, i try to stay awake as long as I can,
But if I fall asleep, I´ll waiting for you - don´t cry
Goodbye, have a nice live