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Hallo Musikmenschen:
Hier mein Track für den Abelton Summer Song Contest für die Altersklasse 15 - 18:
Würde mich über allgemeines Feedback und eventuell auch kleine Mischhilfen falls hier und da noch was ist, freuen. Der Text des Liedes ist...nunja...Emo-Text halt, nicht beachten
Falls jemand am Text mitlesen will:
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Wake me up, Wake me up
I feel like this dream won't stop
I need something to believe in
I just want to see you breathing
I will run in circles if you don't show me the way
and if I will wake up then everything will be okay
I open up my eyes
darkness surrounds me
everything is black but
there is something I can see
My body freezes
I don't make a sound
my heart stops beating as I see you
bleeding on the ground
It can't be real! It can't be real!
Why don't these wounds heal?
Refrain
Wake me up,
the walls come closer
and I still don't know where to go!
Refrain
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Wie gesagt, relativ Emo
mfg
Der Vale
Hier mein Track für den Abelton Summer Song Contest für die Altersklasse 15 - 18:
Würde mich über allgemeines Feedback und eventuell auch kleine Mischhilfen falls hier und da noch was ist, freuen. Der Text des Liedes ist...nunja...Emo-Text halt, nicht beachten
Falls jemand am Text mitlesen will:
============================================
Wake me up, Wake me up
I feel like this dream won't stop
I need something to believe in
I just want to see you breathing
I will run in circles if you don't show me the way
and if I will wake up then everything will be okay
I open up my eyes
darkness surrounds me
everything is black but
there is something I can see
My body freezes
I don't make a sound
my heart stops beating as I see you
bleeding on the ground
It can't be real! It can't be real!
Why don't these wounds heal?
Refrain
Wake me up,
the walls come closer
and I still don't know where to go!
Refrain
=========================================
Wie gesagt, relativ Emo
mfg
Der Vale