LiuvarAldaron
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Hab hier noch einen Liedtext. Da sind einige Stellen, wo ich mir nicht sicher bin, ob man sich so ausdrücken kann. Zum Beispiel im zweiten Teil vom zweiten Vers. Genau wäre echt super, wenn ihr sagen könntet wie ihr das seht. Und auch sonst bin ich über jegliche Kritik dankbar
liebe Grüße
Vers:
I was in a mood to dance,
I felt the beat taking me over,
I can't stand still, I have to move
feeling the music making my heart jump
I have to sing out without a reason
I can't, and don't want to hold myself off
I am loving this world, without
knowing the reason.
[g=52]Chorus[/g]:
My mood was taking you over
the world couldn't bring me down
I'd take you with me
but you don't wanna see.
I can't understand people
accepting to be sad
and don't trying to chance that fact.
Vers:
We are all human and I just give my best
we can't be lucky while our friends are sad.
We need to hold us reciprocal because you can't
always be strong
and hold yourselfs up high in the sky
[g=52]Chorus[/g]:
My mood was taking you over
the world couldn't bring me down
I'd take you with me
but you don't wanna see.
I'm sick of this people
teasing each other thinking
that'd be adjuvant for them.
But today I just give a damn about
liebe Grüße
Vers:
I was in a mood to dance,
I felt the beat taking me over,
I can't stand still, I have to move
feeling the music making my heart jump
I have to sing out without a reason
I can't, and don't want to hold myself off
I am loving this world, without
knowing the reason.
[g=52]Chorus[/g]:
My mood was taking you over
the world couldn't bring me down
I'd take you with me
but you don't wanna see.
I can't understand people
accepting to be sad
and don't trying to chance that fact.
Vers:
We are all human and I just give my best
we can't be lucky while our friends are sad.
We need to hold us reciprocal because you can't
always be strong
and hold yourselfs up high in the sky
[g=52]Chorus[/g]:
My mood was taking you over
the world couldn't bring me down
I'd take you with me
but you don't wanna see.
I'm sick of this people
teasing each other thinking
that'd be adjuvant for them.
But today I just give a damn about