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<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">Hallo ihr lieben Leute
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">ich habe diesen Songtext noch einmal überarbeitet, weil ich mit der ersten Version nicht zufrieden war und da mein Englisch nicht das aller beste ist und meine Rechtschreibung leider auch nicht, wollte ich fragen, ob euch irgendwelche Fehler auffallen. Ihr durft euch natürlich auch gerne zu dem Text an sich äußer. Krititk ist mir immer willkommen.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">liebe Grüße LiuvarAldaron

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<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">Don't give a damn about

<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">I have to move I can't wait for a better day.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">I feel the music taking my hand for a dance.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">I recognize the beat taking me over
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">making my heart beat in and out of time
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<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">Vers:
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">I have to shout my anger out,
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">my disappointment and disaffection.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">I can't sit on the ground.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">I have to jump, to move,
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">to cry, to laugh, to whisper and shout.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">Caus you can't hold yourself off
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">when you think about this world.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">You have to wack out
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">when you see this ridiculous people everywhere.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">On TV screen, in the streets,
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">when you watch the mirror staring at you.
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<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">Chorus:
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">A mood is taking me over.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">I can't take anything for serious.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">It's just too crazy this world.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">I can't and don't want to care anymore.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">Today I don't give a damn about what people do.

<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">I have to sing out without a reason
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">unable to hold myself off.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">I'm loving this world not knowing the reason.
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<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">Vers:
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">Today the world can't bring me down.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">With it's people, I don't understand, teasing each others thinking
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">that would be adjuvant for them.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">Cutting holes in the boat we are all in.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">So I don't understand people accepting to be sad
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">without trying to change that fact.
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<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">Bridge:
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">For shure we all are human but is this our best?
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">We can do so much better, but we are too bussy to get rid of anything.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">We also seem to need a lot of money and other important things.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">But money can't hold your hand when you are sad.
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">So we need to hold us receprocal because we can't allways be strong
<p style="line-height: 100%;" lang="en-GB">to hold ourselfs up in the sky.
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Ein paar Korrekturen: Cause you can't hold yourself off..... You have to whack out,,,,,... This world is just to crazy.
 
Auch noch ein paar Kleinigkeiten:

I can't and don't want to care anymore.

Das holpert ein wenig ... würde entweder I can't ODER I don't want to nehmen

I can't take anything for serious.

Serious verlangt im Englischen KEIN "for": Also entweder:"I can't take anything serious", oder (mein Vorschlag): "I can't take anything TOO serious"

It's just too crazy this world.

Wie schon gesagt: "This world is just too crazy", oder aber "It's just too crazy IN this world". Je nachdem, was du damit sagen willst!


We also seem to need a lot of money and other important things.
But money can't hold your hand when you are sad.

Und der gefällt mir besonders gut! Wünschte, der wär mit eingefallen, aber vielleicht klau ich ihn ja mal bei Gelegenheit von dir
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So long
BV
 

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