Mein erster Songtext (wip)

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Hi,

möchte mal eben einen Songtext für einen House Song vorstellen, der mir heute irgendwie eingefallen ist. Sobals ich nen neuen Rechner am Start hab werd ich den auch ausproduzieren.

Titel: I can't

Strophe1

baby
you don't have to act like you don't know what I mean
cause I know
very well what I've seen

Bridge1

i have some questions:
is she better than me?
does she make you feel free?
or maybe
was it just another good
opportunity?

Strophe2

you told me
that I won't have to worry 'bout a thang
and that our love
is worth much more than just a game...

Bridge2

now you're tellin' me lies
but that ain't a surprise
for what you did to me
next time you better think twice...

Refrain:

i can't give anymore
i can't love you anymore
because the promises you made
all came too late

Bridge2

RefrainX2

Fin :D

Wie findet ihr es soweit, würd mich über etwas [g=94]Feedback[/g] freuen.

LG
 

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