Pendejo

Mickey and Mary

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Moin zusammen,

ich habe mich diesmal an Hip Hop versucht, oder ist es doch Rock oder Metal - na sagen wir mal irgendwie cross over.

Ich bin gespannt wie euch mein Hip Hop Ausflug gefällt und schon mal vielen Dank für euer Feedback.

Hier noch die Lyrics:

Intro:
Mary, is a girl
who had killed 50 people
Don't condemn her
'cause she's had a hard
childhood in the past

Verse 1:
Her shitty fucking father
fucked her all the time
'til once upon a time
friend Mickey came to kill

He smashed a heavy jemmy
right between dads eyes
Blood splashed to the room
and drowned him after that

They also killed her mom too
'Cause she had never helped her
Mickey spilled on the fuel
and Mary set her on fire

They embrace each other
and talked about love
both got into a car
and they drove faraway

Chorus:
They drove through the country
and spread their hate everywhere
No clue and no mercy
Only violence to share


Verse 2:
They killed many people
everywhere they where
They've got their own notion
of rightness and on law

too many bad souvenirs
out of former years
born in to violence
and gave it in return


they fucked on society
they fucked on law
they fucked on the cops
and they fucked on to lives

Evening on a meadow
direct in the desert
Mary was lying on the car
She said to Mickey



2. Break:

Hey Mickey, I see us in the sky
over out there is no death
I see us, we are two angels
you riding on a red horse
catching me
Hey Mickey, take me high in the sky
On your big red horse and fly
I see us - going to Shangri-La
without murder and hate

Not reality!!!

Chorus:
They drove through the country
and spread their hate everywhere
No clue and no mercy
Only violence to share

Verse 3:
No one can understand
why they did what they did
Maybe they're psychopathic
Maybe they 're just honest

In a world of daily war
minds are too cynical
ideals are far away
and mankind too radical

they fucked on society
they fucked on humanity
they fucked on the other
and they fucked on you're live

now they are gone away
direct into hereafter
maybe they went to abyss
maybe into paradise
Autor
Pendejo
Song-Veröffentlichung
Artist
Cellar Project
Kategorie
HipHop
Aufrufe
184
Bewertung
7,50 Stern(e)

Song-Rezensionen

A
Den Crossover-Ansatz finde ich spannend. Leider fehlt dem Rap so ein bisschen der Flow, das gewisse Extra, das dieses Genre braucht. Nachvollziehbar, wenn man da nicht so zu Hause ist, und aus diesem Blickwinkel gesehen trotzdem nicht schlecht gemacht. Der Rock/Metal-Anteil ist da dennoch deutlich stärker. Im Refrain passt das Timing der beiden Stimmen irgendwie nicht so recht. Insgesamt starkes Stück, das Du mit ein bisschen Nacharbeit noch besser machen könntest.
J
Den Flow/Groove mag ich ! Textuell bin ich mir nicht so ganz sicher, ob das so ganz im Takt gemacht wurde. Ich hatte an der Einen oder Anderen Stelle den Eindruck, als wenn es da noch leicht holperig war. Insgesamt aber ein cooles Stück !
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